Hyperbole Tall Poem

Im sweeter than gummy bears
with added sugar.
My dance moves are smoother
than silk milk.
My hair is shinner
than the sun
soft as a babys butt.
but if you dont like me
 you can cut.

alliteration and songs

1)

2 pac If I Die Tonight

picture perfection, pursuin' paper with a passion.
pissin' while practicin' how to pimp and be a playa.

2)Mick Terry-Better Be a Better Boy

Better be a better boy before you bother
betting that you'll bring her back home again.
Try to treat her like you treat a tender lady.
Tell her truthfully that you'll make amends.
She'll be upset for a while.
But you can win with the smile.