Hyperbole Tall Poem

Im sweeter than gummy bears
with added sugar.
My dance moves are smoother
than silk milk.
My hair is shinner
than the sun
soft as a babys butt.
but if you dont like me
 you can cut.

alliteration and songs

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2 pac If I Die Tonight

picture perfection, pursuin' paper with a passion.
pissin' while practicin' how to pimp and be a playa.

2)Mick Terry-Better Be a Better Boy

Better be a better boy before you bother
betting that you'll bring her back home again.
Try to treat her like you treat a tender lady.
Tell her truthfully that you'll make amends.
She'll be upset for a while.
But you can win with the smile.

Poem assignment for 10/13/11

1.)What is poetry?

      -  Poetry is the art or work of a poet.

2.) Who is likely to agree and disagree with you?

      -   Artists might disagree with me because they might think diffrent than me.

3.) Does poetry have to rhyme?

    -  Only the poems with a specific rhyme scheme need to rhyme. The reason why some dont need to rhyme is because they have an assigned syllable count. Which makes them flow in a different way.

4.) Does poetry have to make sense? Can it be random words on a page? Explain

  -  No i dont think poetry have to make sense because thats a way to express your feelings.Yes it can be random words on a page because your expressing your feelings.

5.)What type of feelings does or can poetry evoke (cause)? 

   -  It can cause eny kind of emotion because some are mean,funny or sad .